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Post by Kitty on Dec 10, 2005 4:01:46 GMT -5
Midiska was different and she knew it. She could communicate with animals. She hadn't let on to anyone she could. People just figured she was gifted with animals. They didn't know exactly how right they were.
She lived as a maid in the Lord of the Village's home, cooking, cleaning and looking after his kids.
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Post by Kitty on Dec 10, 2005 4:37:28 GMT -5
this is getting moved to my site
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Post by master on Dec 12, 2005 23:04:37 GMT -5
((first off, ya need new ideas for charicters...seriously... most all your charicters are either vamp or change into animals. this one is a bit diff, yea, but it's following a pattern for animals. second, in an intro, unless you already have someone joining, you should make it big enough for people to actually reply to! so make it detailed and an actual intro that shows something, not just "she was like this and she did this" but detailed. you could turn that one sentence into a paragraph, and should. ah well, that's my rant. sorry, just in a bad mood))
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